decent for your 3rd movie, but excruciatingly short. nothing happened except for a 2D run and a very brief impact.
you should probalby either submit things with a bit more substance, or practice yourself until you're confidant enough to submit something a bit more complex.
start small and work up, but do that yourself. once you've conquered the basics and are able to produce something 20 seconds long or so with a bit more technical animation, then submit it here. i know that it's hard to get feedback this way, but it will save you from getting blammed which is a hit to your confidence ;p.
what was there was good... but there just wasn't much and was simple.
it's ok, i guess.
good idea for a short, i suppose. but the animation detail is lacking. if you're only going to move things with 2D, use tweens.
the bigger issue is the fact that it SHOULDNT have all been 2D movement. more detail needed to be put into the motion of the guy.
bonus points for not using stickmen though. i hate stickmen, they are like cheating (most of the time).
it was interesting. I have a feeling that this means a lot more to the people who were in it than it does to the rest of us.
good use of static pictures, althoguh it isn't really animation in the traditional sense... not particualrly skillful, it was still entertaining.
Actually, pretty cool.
It was simple, but there was elegance in its minimalism. I found myself enjoying it more than i thought i should ;p.
a little more mickymousing would be nice so that everything really has a strong connection with the music, but still good.
People are dumb
before ANYONE else reviews this and says "you need to make your animation smoother"... they had better freakin be frame-by-frame animators. its real fuckin easy to make a nice smoothe animation when you use tweens... but guess what? tweens are lame. you can only do 2D transformations.
I DO do FBF animation, and the artist knows me (a bit), and it could use a bit of work... however i know how hard it is. id say the animation on this is better than about 95 percent of NG stuff. seriously... madness animations? tweens. lame. this is actual animation.
anyways, i thought this was pretty damn good. so anyone else who complains about the quality of animtion, try to draw ALMOST the same thing about 40 times in a row, then do that another few hundred times given the size of this animation.
good job neolight. i liked it ;p
wow, amazing job
the animation was very well done. the motions were convincing and the change in positions were timed will with them.
also exelent voicing, usualy when i come on here i listen to a few flash videos and get fed up with the crappy voices. you did a great job.
colorful, smoothe, tasteful and funny. you get my 5;p
ive watched this thing like 20 times, and forced it on everyone i could. this thing is FUCKING CONGRUIOUS ASS RAPER!!!
too bad i cant spell that lol.
do you guys have any crack?
man, that was awesome!
man, that was killer! its like those really smooth stick animations, only not stick. makes it like x1000 better.
+10 animation of coolness ^^
the end was too funny also ^^, great. amazing job. makes me wanna find another copy of flash mx and try flash again... too bad i sucked at all previous atempts.
anyways. back to your flash. amazing. nuff said. ;p
the way you drew your characters was great, origonal. and your animation was fluid and very will done, it matched the upbeat song great. amazing combo. superfreakingamazing.
pretty good, some exelent parts and some not so...
ya, newgrounds was right, it gets better towards the end. the best part is the fight scene before he does that transformation thing, right after he loses the uzi's. that was exelent, however the beginning was kinda wierd and not as well done as the rest. also sometimes the real backgrounds clashed with the drawn objects/characters. sometimes it worked really well thoguh. of course i couldnt do anythin nearly this good so ill shut up now, lol.
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